I chose an ADHD medication advertisement. The ad portrays a young boy
with red hair and freckles who is smiling in a classroom setting. It describes
a typical day at school before and after the medication. A typical day before
the medication starts with the child forgetting his homework, it then states
how the child interrupts the teacher, and lastly how the child eats alone. A
typical day with the medication starts with taking “Concerta”, it then states
how the child pays attention in class, and then how the child interacts with
his classmates, and lastly how he focuses on his homework. At the bottom of the
ad it states “Concerta can help your child get on the path to success in
managing ADHD. Once a day will help your child focus at school and at home.” It
also states that it has improved school interactions as reported by teachers
and parents.
This advertisement is targeted to parents who have
children with ADHD. It persuades you to purchase this medication by comparing a
child with and without the medication. It is deceiving by stating the child
will pay attention in class, interact better with other classmates, and focus
on homework. Maybe by taking the medication it may improve their symptoms, but
it won’t make your child the ideal student. Comparing this ad to my own child,
who does not have ADHD, would make me feel uncertain of weather he would need
this medication as well. My son has forgotten his homework more than once and has
difficultly focusing on schoolwork, but that doesn’t mean my son has ADHD and
needs medication. It is just simply because he is not interested in school.
In my own personal opinion, I think teachers do
not have the patience for a child with behavioral problems and so quickly blame
it on ADHD. When this is brought to the parents attention instead of trying to
correct the behavioral issues they turn to medications such as, “Concerta” to
“fix” their child. Children then become dependent on medication and sometimes
when they become adults they tend to turn to drugs and alcohol. In conclusion,
I do believe the advertisement is effective in selling their product, but it is
also deceptive.
You do a good job at the beginning here, starting in the description (though i think it could be a bit more complete- explaining the blackboard in the background with check-marks and text around the kid's head).
ReplyDeleteThe second half of para. 2 and para. 3, though, stray away from analyzing the ad itself to commenting on its message (based on outside info). This is more/different than what the assignment asks you to consider.
Clear and pretty competent writing throughout though!
Would you like me to rewrite it?
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