"Show don't tell"

1. I grew up in a small, quiet town, where you wake up to the birds chirping in the morning and where everyone knows your name.
2. Laci walked into class wearing a lime green sweater vest, basketball shorts, rainbow colored toe socks, and flip flops.
3. Mr. Brown shows up to his class late most days smelling of whiskey, and sleeping away first and second periods.
4. I walked into the classroom it felt cold and the lighting was dim.